Finding Who Killed Him
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Last published Sat, Sep 23, 2017
"Speeding down the highway I realized my vacation had been brought to a stop by the death of a man that brought the whole Vancouver to a standstill. But well who was I to determine my vacation? The job hated anything of that sort
This is a story of a highly influential man killed by unknown assailants in his sleep. Could it be his innocent looking daughter Anna who has a gold digger as a boyfriend or his young wife Bella who has past affiliation with Mexican Mafias or his mentally unstable sister Sophia. Well it is all up to Detective Edward to unravel this mystery.
This story has no connection with any person or place living or dead and any of such coincidences is by mere accident
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