The Fabrication

The Fabrication

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The time is after the clone war(obviously) but instead of abandoning a great tool the new emperor plans to turn an old tool to a improved asset. He wants bring the Dread General Greivous back to life well partially he would still be cybernetic in most ways have the same armor style but of a stronger material to not be so easily disarmed. But there is something he didn't no grevious had which was his the implants in his brain that made his old self loyal to the count and the emperor himself. He knew that they improved his brain activity, his reaction time, combat styles of the Jedi, and his tactical abilities but not his loyalty. The fabrication differs from his old self or DNA host in many ways. Thanks to sideous he's faster in agility and reaction time . He's smarter than his old self in combat tactics and analyzation of his opponents in face to face combat. He also will be in the arts of science space travel, mechanics, and construction of ships. But what makes him truly unique from the old General is his personality. Instead of being a cruel General not caring about loss of life and hatred to his enemies. He is joyful and cares for the lives of his men always. He is also jokeful with others including other imperial officers. He may have the memories of his past life and he understands the hate the blindness of not seeing it all but he knows who really is to blame for it all. His creator and architect of the previous war. He hates the emperor but wishes his death be swift. He knows he can't challenge the emperor no one can nor even the rebel alliance. But he looks for every opportunity to leave the empire. This is his story All rights go to Lucas arts and Disney And bio ware for the amazing rpg games they make
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"My lineage is a well known one, for both good and bad reasons. But I don't let it define me." "That is an admirable quality Ratheon. But unfortunately, certain Council Members will always see you as a dangerous man." "Then that is their mistake to make. My blood does not define me, but it does give me guidance. I may be descended from a powerful Sith Lord, but I am also, a Jedi Master's Son. Satele Shan's, Son." ~~~~~~~ The Old Republic. An age where when danger and mystery was at every turn. But the most common thing that the Old Republic was known for, was the constant battle between Light, and Dark. Satele Shan, Grandmaster of the Jedi Order, and a devout Jedi. Born as a descendant of Revan and Bastilla Shan, she carved out her path as a true Jedi, one that would strive to serve the Galaxy, like all Jedi should. But what if, she had a Padawan? And what if that Padawan...was her Son? Ratheon Shan... Like his Mother, Ratheon was a devout Jedi, and served the Jedi Order with unwavering loyalty, and especially, the cause that his Mother drilled into him when he was a mere child? After the attack on the Jedi Temple by the fierce Sith Lord, Darth Malgus, and his subsequent defeat on Alderaan, the Sith Empire ramped up their attacks on both the Jedi, and the Republic. As such, Satele chose to both safeguard the order, and save her Son. Freezing him in Carbonite, the Grandmaster of the Jedi Order believed that no matter what happened, her Son would safeguard the Jedi Order they had both sworn to protect, through his unique, and rather..."grey", attitude... But before he was frozen, Ratheon revealed to his Mother...that he had a son, and that he wished to adopt a new last name, that last name that he had chosen for his son. The name in question? Skywalker... ~~~~~~~~~~ AGAIN, NOTHING BELONGS TO ME EXCEPT MY OC CHARACTERS.

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