White Shoes Dirty Easily
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Last published Sat, Mar 25, 2017
Jane lives in an enhanced society and nothing is imperfect.
Depression and cancer are just other illnesses that are impossible for that day and age to happen,
travelling from one end of the earth to the other is one click away,
and the Government promises to eradicate all unhappiness of the world.
It's just like the fantasy everyone has ever wanted.
*Not recommended for readers under 13
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Published On: 2017
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