Broken Maiden
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MatureComplete Wed, Apr 26, 20175m
A poetic story of a boy who wonders into a garden of long lost memories. A spirit with an innocence once pure like the boy's comes out of hiding to tell her story. She shows what she saw herself to be and reveals the pain that had turn her pure white rose a scarlet red.
What will the boy think of the spirit after witnessing her past, her pain and regret?
Will he too see her as a monster?
Or tell her what she was all along,
The one and only Broken Maiden.
DISCLAIMER AND TRIGGER WARNING: This story is in no way meant to be misogynistic or offensive. This is meant to tell an emotional story about abuse and the struggles that come from it.
#Third place winner of the 2017 Rites of Spring Contest.
Word count: 998 words
Cover made by @desiired
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