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Not What It Seems
  • Reads 191
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  • Parts 13
  • Time 40m
  • Reads 191
  • Votes 16
  • Parts 13
  • Time 40m
Complete, First published Mar 23, 2017
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Meet Ray. An incredibly intelligent and talented child prodigy. You would think her life must be so marvelous, after all not every 14 year old has a bachelor's degree in psychology. However, Ray lives with her aunt because her mom abandoned her for some guy, she's has only recently made her first friend ever, and her mom shows up time after time to harass her. As if that wasn't enough, to top it all of, after an accident, Ray was sucked into an alternate dimension where her alternative self (who is a guy mind you) is also being harassed. Except this time by a crazy power hungry lunatic, and it is up to her to help the other Ray. Join Ray as she weaves in and out of dimensions unexpectedly, trying to help her alternative self (who, as she believes, is quite dense) while also trying her best to help herself. Embark on a journey where a broken girl oh so willingly uses her knowledge of the human brain to assists others and their problems, while also trying to come to face with her own. 
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