Devoted: A Bates Motel Reimagining
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Last published Fri, Sep 13, 2019
[This is a reimagining/Alternate Universe of the TV show "Bates Motel" on A&E with the addition of two characters: Loretta Massett and Mellie Bates. This is *NOT* canon. However, I am trying to the best of my ability to follow the show's initial plot, the only changes will be due to the new characters.]
Four years after moving out with her sixteen-year-old half-sister, Mellie, twenty-two-year-old Loretta Massett decides to give her mother, Norma, a second chance after having received a call saying she's starting her life over. It's not long, however, before Loretta and Mellie realize they've gotten way more than they've bargained for.
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