Prologue
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This is the prologue in a fiction novel that I have been working on. It's about a group of neurotic teens/young adults and their struggles with addiction, compulsive behaviors, infidelity, and each other in general. This scene is between two of the main characters. Please feel free to provide me with feedback and constructive criticism. Thank you so much for your time.
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