Turning Point

Turning Point

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My very first time writing, has a lot of errors, but could really use some feedback. Urban Style book based on good and the bad things we face today. Rich and JD are the smartest men in the streets. Their up bringing is among the hardest of struggles. What is King if he doesn't have Queen? Rich is a firm believer in that. Amya is the most beautiful woman in his eyes and would stop at nothing to protect her. JD is reckless and lives life on the edge, although he is wild he's a planner and knows exactly what he's doing. When everything is going good, the very next moment everything can change, how do you adapt? Will you break down or stand up? Turning Point. If you would like to help me with editing and any suggestions email me : matthewhilljr56@gmail.com
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Book 1 1859, London. Victoria is the Queen, England is finishing the Second Opium War with China, and Amelia Hemmings is 19 and still not married. She's shy, introverted, but also short tempered and sassy. She doesn't consider herself "wife material." In an attempt to marry her off, Amy's cousin, Celine, and Uncle, John, force her to every dance imaginable. However, on one brutal night after a ball, Amy is thrown into a dark and most inconvenient world of arrogant millionaires, handsome men who run drug cartels, business, family secrets, and a violent rivalry. All of this is thanks to a Mr Damien Lancaster. Self made millionare. Arrogant. Cold. Detached. Rude. Handsome. Lethal. Amy has to learn about all of her instincts to survive, but something comes up that makes her question herself. Should she be focused on saving her own life, or Mr Lancaster's? Highest rankings: #3 in Victorian #5 in 19thcentuary #2 in regencyengland (Dec. 9, 2020) #1 in 19th (Jun. 27, 2020) #581 in business (Dec. 30, 2019) *** Warning: some violence, abuse, strong language, and mentions of rape --if there are any errors or confusing sentences, I would appreciate it if you commented on it. I try to keep things grammatically correct but some things slip through the cracks. I will update the passage as soon as I know about it--

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