Blacksmiths daughter

Gwendolyn is a young girl of 19, living happily with her father, the village blacksmith. But at her age, life isn't easy. And who is that young man watching, always watching her by the side of her house?
But when a dark cloaked man arrives in her village, the things that used to be important become insignificant as she is faced with a new danger.

I started this ages ago, but coming back I saw that it actually isn't too bad... And I want to try finishing it! All the support you guys give me is awesome, thanks! And of course, if you notice any typo or other mistake please please tell me, I'd like to perfect this!