Four: A Dauntless Prodigy
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Tobias Eaton instantly became what seemed tone the "perfect Dauntless" when he joined the faction. He ranked first in his initiate class and earned his nickname "Four" with a lot of hard work. But was it just that easy for him? Find out by reading about his life up until he met Tris.
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