When The World Stops Making Sense

When The World Stops Making Sense

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She looked at me with a face smudged with blood, "Be good" she said "try and find friends who will help you in life and please forgive me for leaving you so soon", tears started pouring from her eyes and she started to close her eyes,"momma" a 3 year old was calling for his sleeping mother yet she didn't wake up, he crawled to her side and just looked around seemingly at nothing with an innocence of a child oblivious to his surrounding. Out side of the stone temple where the woman and her child lay, fire hotter than lava was eating at the landscape obliterating everything in its path "Where is it" a man with a spider tattoo on his neck shouted to the scared people of the Burning village. No one knew where the item was hidden, the thief was last seen running towards this village after being injured by the horsemen of hell, fierce men who have a stone cold heart and a desire for murder, their body was cursed to not feel any pain and their soul belong to their master. They are the ultimate warriors. "we don't know we swear, please have mercy" an old woman with bone sticking out of her leg after being beaten said, she immediately caught fire and died screaming cursing her killer. He would have laughed if he didn't absolutely need to find that item or he would die for his failure. "I said WHERE IS IT" fire sprawled out of his hand like a snake and melted the ground near his next victim, "we never saw anyone entering this village with the description you gave us, the only people or .. THINGS who came here in the past month are the old priest you murderers killed on the outskirts of the village and a woman and her child and those also died by your fire" the young man spat with a death glare towards his tormenter. .........)) ___________________________________________ I hope you enjoy this story and of course I welcome any criticism but not in the comment section, if you feel like criticising my story then by all means do so but in my inbox and I will reply.
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Allen Walker(NOT FROM D-GRAYMAN), a 13 year old boy with a dream to become a warrior, just like his Father Argon Walker. And 4 childhood friends will gather together and reclaim what was once theirs. Wonderful tales about adventures and battles against the Empire of Gallamine... But this was not one of those heroic times. The messenger was a soldier of the King, bearing a Blue cloak with a Gold insignia of the King, The Mighty Blue Dragon, on his hands. Allen's mother covered her face with grief and ran inside the house. Allen wanted to cry, but he kept a brave face. His lower lip wouldn't stop trembling. As he extended his hands for the cloak, the messenger unveiled his hoodie and underneath was his Uncle Waller with tears and red nose. Allen ran and hugged him. Not letting him go, thinking he too would suddenly disappear. "Allen... Please take this inside." Said Waller, "I will come back when we have done the ceremony for his burial." Waller kneeled down with his arms extended, offering Allen his fathers cloak. "But... Uncle Waller. What-" I started crying, but kept a brave face. "I understand Uncle *Sniff* I will be brave for the family and Mom." I took the cloak from his hands, and something clicked inside my head. A voice came through to my head, more a whisper than a normal voice. Uncle Waller stood up and walked away. I embraced the cloak, my tears falling on it, as I remembered my fathers scent. "I don't know what happened... But I promise you this Father, I will find the person who did this to you, and make it pay for taking you away from our family". I swore with anger burning in my heart. "I must grow strong, just like Father, Uncle and Grandpa... I will become The strongest Warrior there ever was, you will see Father..." I walked back inside the house. "Allen... You have promise..." Said the whisper, "I will help you grow strong, and get Revenge..." Said the voice with sadness, "You are a very special Kid".

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