When The World Stops Making Sense

When The World Stops Making Sense

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WpMetadataNoticeUltima pubblicazione gio, mar 30, 2017
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She looked at me with a face smudged with blood, "Be good" she said "try and find friends who will help you in life and please forgive me for leaving you so soon", tears started pouring from her eyes and she started to close her eyes,"momma" a 3 year old was calling for his sleeping mother yet she didn't wake up, he crawled to her side and just looked around seemingly at nothing with an innocence of a child oblivious to his surrounding. Out side of the stone temple where the woman and her child lay, fire hotter than lava was eating at the landscape obliterating everything in its path "Where is it" a man with a spider tattoo on his neck shouted to the scared people of the Burning village. No one knew where the item was hidden, the thief was last seen running towards this village after being injured by the horsemen of hell, fierce men who have a stone cold heart and a desire for murder, their body was cursed to not feel any pain and their soul belong to their master. They are the ultimate warriors. "we don't know we swear, please have mercy" an old woman with bone sticking out of her leg after being beaten said, she immediately caught fire and died screaming cursing her killer. He would have laughed if he didn't absolutely need to find that item or he would die for his failure. "I said WHERE IS IT" fire sprawled out of his hand like a snake and melted the ground near his next victim, "we never saw anyone entering this village with the description you gave us, the only people or .. THINGS who came here in the past month are the old priest you murderers killed on the outskirts of the village and a woman and her child and those also died by your fire" the young man spat with a death glare towards his tormenter. .........)) ___________________________________________ I hope you enjoy this story and of course I welcome any criticism but not in the comment section, if you feel like criticising my story then by all means do so but in my inbox and I will reply.
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Through thick and thin the Law shall prevail. A new sense of purpose awaits us, children of light, in the land where it all began. The darkness in which we once cowered in fear, now curbed by the might of our endless light. Come, brothers, come, sisters. Let there be peace among the wicked, just as the Law dictates. Peace and certainty is all that you have ever longed for, little angel. A bright, stable future. A roof without holes above thy head. Acknowledgement and recognition of thy existence, feverish dreams of grandeur. Greed born from yearning, treacherous vines of rapacity taint your innocent soul. You seek a future that does not exist. Let thy fingers hold the fragile line between dream and nightmare. Let thy light navigate the path. Shall thee give in and falter, O' land of old, envelop his body in thy unending flame of chaos. Spit out nothing but an empty husk, the remnants of a smile once so bright. Shall thee prevail, O', Great Kazdel, I ask of you, the impossible - take mercy on the innocent. Don't let the radiance dim and don't let the mind turn bleak. Wake, young traveler. Bid thy farewells and burn thy bridges. It's time to say goodbye, curly head. Cross post from AO3. For a shorter and more on-point description, look no further! I had something silly written up before throwing it out in exchange for that wall of text upstairs. It's a little story "about a young, dumb sankta who's been dealt a bad hand at life, looking for his place in all this mess. The pointless search for a better future leads him far, far away from home, to a country forever ravaged by war and misery - Kazdel, the promised land where devils roam free and peace feels out of place." Anyway, it's quite lengthy, but hopefully enjoyable? Slide a comment if you want, I'll give you a tiny kiss on the forehead. Man, do I love comments. (Lastly, to point out, English is not my native language, but I don't think it'll be much of an issue ;3)

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