I would highly appreciate all constroctive criticism but please no hate this is the first story I've written down and I'm actually quite scared. this book is going to be all over the place as I'm just writing whats in my head with no proof reading and editing only done by my MacBook. Thank you! As a young girl I was Innocent, Free... happy but now thats all gone... they took it all away from me, they betrayed me, but its ok because there all dead now.All Rights Reserved