Will You Save Me... Please (Rewritten Horribly)
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Ok so this is a rewrite of a horrible story I wrote in like 5th grade so you know, it sucks. Absolutely no plot or correct spelling. But hey! I'm trying! And we'll I changed a few things to make the story run more smoothly.
He's a 23 year old rookie cop that just became a officer at the NYPD, she's a 23 year old kidnapping victum that's be gone for over a year. What happens when his fellow officers give him the impossible task of finding her? Will he see the clues the others missed and save her before it's to late? Or will he give up and lose any chance of saving her?
Cover pic by somebody on Google.... Enjoy!!😊
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