A Rose For Me

Her hair softly flowed from the scalp of her head as she walked towards him. He felt his heartbeat, and he was sure that she could hear it too. Her eyes were a cascade of different colors changing every second, her footsteps were soft on the padded ground, barely heard over the sound of crickets chirping.

My teacher told my class to write a story that was like 'A Rose For Emily' and this is what I wrote. The two requirements for it was we had to have long sentences and it had to have a twist at the end.