Maybe One Day They'll Notice (Rewritten)

Maybe One Day They'll Notice (Rewritten)

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Winter has 5 best friends. The only problem is no one notices how she has changed after all the years they've noticed each other. Winter gets more depressed everyday over the past 3 years. Chloe, Roxy, Chelsea, and Scarlet still have not noticed. After so long someone finally starts to recognize Winter's condition. Winter doesn't know her, neither does anyone else. This voice guides her. She thinks she's gone insane until she sees her. Winter is guided back to happiness but that is not how it ends... The only way my mind shuts up is with that blade going through my skin. I cut my wrist until my mind is finally calm. My mind actually shut up, without my razor. But, why? -(Hi there.)- A voice said in my mind. -Who is that? Am I going crazy? What is happening?- I said in my head, getting a panic attack. This is a rewrite of my first published book. I loved the idea of it but honestly the writing style was shit. I would read this first instead of going to the shittier book but do what ever. I would just read this instead. Yes, I did finish then first book and decided that I was so happy with the characters that I was able to make a second book. The first word of the first chapter has not been written yet and a cover has not been made but once I finish rewriting this first one. I hope you enjoy this book as I'm going to make it better with suspense and emotion.
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I could feel a cold, icy gaze barrel straight through my soul. Actual crystal shapes frosted white marked the edges of the creature's vision. A long, thin tail with a thin frost layer gently wrapped around me. Normally I would've run, escape through the trees to the best of my abilities. But I couldn't. The icy blue gaze was hypnotizing. The dragon gently puffed frost in my face. Small, gleaming white teeth caught the snow. No matter how brilliant this dragon looked, however, I couldn't fight back the only other thought that was running through my head. I was gonna die. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Kiara has lived on her own for as long as she can remember. But when she finds her fate caught with the Dragon Riders, secrets are uncovered about her identity, and she has to choose between fighting her father...or facing the only friends she'd ever known in battle. Secrets, betrayal, and lies, all circling Kiara's life as she struggles to fit in with the Riders, and find where her fate truly stands. OLD: While I'm very proud for this being my first completed major project, it's still old as hell, several things make 0 sense and there's a lot of random convoluted stuff and little consistency, especially in characters. This was something I wrote to escape when I was down and often sleep-deprived so I just wrote what I felt like in the moment. THIS ALSO APPLIES TO ITS SEQUELS. If that isn't your thing, I wouldn't recommend this.

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