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The Flawed
LJventurini
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LJventurini
Ongoing, First published Apr 03, 2017
20172017-wattys2017wattysactionadventureflawlessmysterysci-fisciencefictionscifithrillerwattys
'The FLAW System' runs the world. All of humanity lives here, split up into Seven Sectors. In this action-packed story, A group of 70 of five year olds, each year, are sent down to 'TheZone'. A place far underground which is where they grow up without anyone bringing them up but themselves, and must learn to be perfect. Anyone from age 10 onwards that makes any mistake will be executed, and anyone who remembers anything from their past before they were brought to TheZone will be also executed. Everyone sees mistakes as a threat to man-kind and at the age of 18, everyone develops a flaw, almost like a power but they MUST learn to control it. People who can't learn to handle their flaw, are called 'The Flawed', and are feared and frowned upon. In this spell-binding story, there apears to be a glitch in the system, and this main character is about to find out the sinister truth behind her flaw.
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