When the Banshee Whispers
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  • Reads 197
  • Votes 25
  • Parts 13
  • Time 3h 48m
Ongoing, First published Apr 04, 2017
"I never wanted to be a killer. Never wanted to be a fighter like my father.  The first life I took was my mother's... Hundreds would follow."

Born a prince, destined to be king. Exiled as cursed. Ingo Jurgin, the Ghostmaker, has left a mountain of dead in his wake. But now he sees a chance to redeem himself. If he can keep one promise. If he can just save one life instead of ending it. Death herself has told him he is doomed, but just maybe. 

Can one's soul be saved when they walk with death and angels curse their very name. Can things be different, just once. 


This is the book I'm working on now. Working title. 
Fantasy with aspects of a few mythologies, mostly viking.
Feedback is appreciated. The format didn't transfer perfect but I'll try and get that worked out going forward.
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