Can't Breathe
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Last published Tue, Aug 7, 2018
Every four or so days, Tina Mycroft dies. Then, like Jesus, she is resurrected into a different place, different family, different life. But she is still Tina. Every time she dies, she's in a situation of which she cannot breath. Drowning, suffocated, strangled. Each time, the oxygen is cut off and that's the pronounced cause of death. Tina sees her old body's court case on the TV, her old family screaming and crying. But why is her life doing this to her? Why does she die as if it's routine? And how on earth can she put this torture to an end?
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