The Space Between Us

The Space Between Us

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Gardner Elliot is a sixteen year old who is the first Martian ever. His mother Sarah Elliot, was the lead astronaut of a team that was sent to live on Mars. She was unexpectedly pregnant, and gave birth to Gardner on Mars. Gardner's body cannot handle Earth's atmosphere; he must remain on the red and dead planet. But he falls in love with a girl named Tulsa, over social media, and is more than ever determined to travel to Earth to meet her in person. But it is not an easy thing to achieve, and many complications get in the way. Fate determines them to be together whether alive, or dead. *Disclaimer* I got the ideas from the movie and decided that I liked my idea better. The movie didn't get the ending I like. So I made my own!
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Kayla Madison is a normal-ish sixteen-year old whose main desire is simple-make it through high school without embarrassing herself too much in the process. It doesn't help that she's being followed by dark figures no one else sees. When a man with incredible speed, unbelievable power, strange old-fashion clothes, and an obnoxious personality threatens her life, she discovers she is a rare "two-worlder" -a person with one parent from Earth and the other from Earth Prime. She escapes another attack by jumping through a portal to the alternate dimension, much to the chagrin of her protector. As if managing without electricity, cars, and phones on the more Edwardian world weren't enough stress; she finally meets her long-absent father, a scientist in the top-secret field of Trans-Dimensional Travel. Things get more complicated when she realizes her best friend's father, or rather the Earth Prime version of him, might have been the person that orchestrated the assaults. ___ Thanks for reading! I've been working on this story for quite a while and have drafts for a five book series. I would love feedback on what I can do to make it a stronger story. If there are things you enjoy, let me know (so I don't change those parts.) :) All portions of the story have been submitted and final chapters will visible by Nov 18, 2023. Among other degrees, I have my MFA in creative writing. I am a science teacher when I am not writing.

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