An Unfortunate Love
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Last published Fri, Aug 17, 2018
What if Tris had chosen differently? What if she chose Abnegation?
Tris is beginning her new life in Abnegation when they are attacked by mind-controlled Dauntless.
Tobias Eaton, or Four as many know him as, is a Divergent Dauntless. He isn't under the mind-control simulation like the others. Once he sees Tris he instantly falls in love with her. It is his mission, now, to protect her.
But will Tris believe this mysterious boy with the dark blue eyes when he says, "run".
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