Five Minutes
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Last published Thu, Feb 26, 2015
"That's when I heard a pop, and the daughter stood stock-still. I saw her look down at her chest, wondering what had happened-but I already knew. She collapsed, falling into a heap of snow. Her mother cried out weakly, seeing her little girl with no soul left in her lifeless body. She didn't run to the daughter. She put something in her purse, flung it to the ground, and kicked the bag so it appeared to be next to me. She was doing something with my cold fingers, and she ran into the evergreens.
"In my hand, was a gun."
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