Don't open the door
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13 year old Natalie Bruno moves into a vacant Victorian home with her mom after her dad dies in a fire.
Characters
Natalie the main character, she is 13 years old with long wavy blonde hair and purple eyes and pale skin.
Giacomo. . Natalie meets him in her new school and they start a friendship. He is 13 years old with dark blonde hair and greenish-blueish eyes.
Marie-Magaret. One of many ghosts in Natalie's home. She is a onryo. A onryo is a type of ghost, typically a young women who has been wronged by a man in her lfe.
Pat. Pat is Natalie's mother. She has auburn hair and green eyes.
Those are all the characters I can think of. I will add more as I progress in my story.
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