Don't open the door

Don't open the door

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Last published Fri, Jan 24, 2014

13 year old Natalie Bruno moves into a vacant Victorian home with her mom after her dad dies in a fire. Characters Natalie the main character, she is 13 years old with long wavy blonde hair and purple eyes and pale skin. Giacomo. . Natalie meets him in her new school and they start a friendship. He is 13 years old with dark blonde hair and greenish-blueish eyes. Marie-Magaret. One of many ghosts in Natalie's home. She is a onryo. A onryo is a type of ghost, typically a young women who has been wronged by a man in her lfe. Pat. Pat is Natalie's mother. She has auburn hair and green eyes. Those are all the characters I can think of. I will add more as I progress in my story.

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