Dear Sydney
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This is an apology to a friend I hurt a few years ago. Shes having her graduation party and I wanted to give this to her. Any tips on how I can improve it?
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Two young women go out to a night club... only to find out it's a mafia party (it's my first story. Yall give me feedbacks for my improvements)
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