The Haunted Castle
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Five friends enter into an abandoned castle and they stay the night there. But when they start hearing strange voices and unexplained sounds in the corridor, they reluctantly venture out to investigate.
Following many skin-crawling and spine-chilling discoveries, they run to the front door in a desperate attempt to escape. But after many attempts to breech the door, all of which were failures, the friends' efforts are rendered useless. It is then that they realize the awful truth; they have been locked in the castle never to see the outside world again.
Will the five friends be able to escape the grasp of the castle or will they remain trapped within its walls till the end of time?
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A good friend of mine has helped to edit my mistakes and errors throughout this book. At this time we are still working through the chapters one by one to fix all issues. When we are done, we will republish this entire book once more.
If you would like to pay her a visit her profile name is Fruitcake412. I'm sure she would love to hear from you all.
Lastly, I'd like to give a HUGE shout out to my friend, Fruitcake412, for making me the amazing book cover and writing the new description. Thank-you so much!
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