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Are you worried that your OC is a Mary/Gary sue? Or do you feel like your OC needs improvement? Well, you've come to the right place, just fill out the form and I'll give your OC an honest review! I'll have to warn you, I might not go easy on you 




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Wings of fire
Teen titans 
Hetalia
Undertale 
FNAF

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Down the Drain by Call_Me_Hanaki

He felt weak.He felt sick.He felt pain. But why?He had a normal day yesterday.He stayed at the dorms,he hanged out with his friends,he bonded with everyone,he didn't even train! So why?Why does he felt so sick. "𝐶𝑜𝑢𝑔ℎ!𝐶𝑜𝑢𝑔ℎ!" He looked at his hand. Blood... What's happening to Izuku? ........................................................................... Based on an actual event that happened to me during middle school. The only difference is that it's less embarrassing and a whole lot more angsty... This is what happens when I can't sleep so I think about story plots and at the same time remembering embarrassing moments during elementary- ........................................................................... Mha does not belong to me. Only the cover and the fanfic/one-shot.

My Hero no Ko: Glamrocked and Breached by ZeldrisKibutsuji18

Izuku Yagi, son of All Might and Magnetic, neglected by his parents and bullied by his sister and childhood friends. He didn't have a quirk, that's all there is to it. For years hes endured their torment and harassment. Even tho he loved heroes with all his heart, there was another spot in his heart that held a special place there. Freddy Fazbear's Mega Pizzaplex. Whenever he was bored or lonely, he would visit the Pizzaplex with his only friend to see his favorite animatronics and spend time there until it was time for the place to close. But tragedy struck when his bullies took their torture too far and ended up killing him near the Pizzaplex. His soul wandered and now possesses a locked up and old Endoskeleton that was underneath the establishment. Filled with hatred and wanting revenge, he held back his murderous emotions and found a new place he can call home and new friends who are always there for him... The Idol and The Mimic Arc The Forgotten Arc Rise of the Man Behind The Slaughter Arc Discovery of Past and Present Arc Nightmarish House Arc U.A's Joy of Creation Arc Moving Up in the World Arc Secret of the Mimic Arc I do not own FNAF or MHA, none of the characters are mine and belong to their respective owners.

My Hero Academia: Entering the FNAF Fandom by PhantomPlayz140

After Cookie has glitched out, the group of Class 1-A students had mysteriously entered a new fandom: FNAF. Would there be surprises? Would they survive? Would they escape out of the fandom alive? Phantom is the next to take over and will try to guide them as she suffered being with them (she doesn't enjoy company most of the time) -NOT COMPLETED, ONGOING- Edit on August 07, 2021: DISCONTINUED! ✏️-INFO (NEED TO BE READED)-✏️ None of the characters or the AUs are mine! Some will be my version, I think, idk... ANYWAYS, credit to the original creators and the creators who made the AUs! UwU FNAF fandom! Read the last two parts in 'My Hero Academia: Meeting the Dekuverse' and you'll probably get the idea. ⚠️-Disclaimers/Warnings!-⚠️ Some characters may not act like the original Autocorrects (I reread the book, and I saw multiple autocorrects) Improper Grammer/ Spelling Mistakes/ Confusing Lines (Often used) Cheesy (?) Most of the characters don't speak often Cussing/Swear Words NO SHIPS (think of them all as friends and close friends, and classmates) FNAF (MY AU!!! KEEP THAT IN MIND!) ➕-Added-➕ Myself (Ahem! Isn't that what these kind of fan fictions (?) do?) FNAF FANDOM (is this considered being added? Lol) 📊 -BEST Rankings- 📊 (UNKNOWN)

Doki Doki: Into The Multiverse by P_R_Official

Join me as we delve deeper into the Alternate Universes kept within the "Into Madness" multiverse! Some of these AUs will not feature the full cast! Some will only contain one or two characters. //DISCLAIMER// These are only for fun. Some are completely original but most play off of already existing head-canons that i have for certain worlds and stories. Do not view these worlds as 100% my own. Also, the amount of worlds that appear in the multiverse do not match the amount of AUs that appear here! The ones that are here are just the big ones that are more noteworthy and some smaller ones that i thought would be cool to add. Enjoy! :)

Entertaining a Small Thought Extras and One-Shots by GrimGenesis

A collection of whatever One-Shots and Extras I might do for Entertaining a Small Thought or Rin in general in the future. Anything that is a one-off idea I get distracted or an idea for a full/short story involving Rin, Danganronpa, or my Fanganronpa OCs will be put here instead of the main Entertaining a Small Thought story. Tags and chapters will be added and removed if/as drafts or one-shots turn into full stories. Many of these will contain spoilers for Entertaining a Small Thought's plot and ending.

The Skeletons and the Abandoned Cottage | Sans & Papyrus X Reader | AU Antiharem by xxBubbleyTea

Against your better judgement, you decide to go to the grocery store on an early Sunday morning. With no evil girlfriend to get past first, your fate is sealed as the Great Papyrus is eager to befriend you and prove his superior pasta making skills! Before you know it, everything you know is changing before you. NO 👏🏻FUCKING👏🏻 SMUT🫵🏻 YOU HOMOS

The Rogue Rebellion [Nightmare!Sans x Reader] [[SEQUEL TO FORBIDDEN]] by sighnerd

Warrior Cats x Undertale Multiverse Crossover ~~~~~~~~ None of the clans have seen Ash or the other rogues in years. Peace has settled among the clans, apart from the common small border skirmish. Nightmare and Y/N are expecting a daughter to arrive any minute. But there's always a calm before the storm. The eye of a hurricane. Ash is secretly planning his revenge, and when he comes, a darkness will fall over the clans like no other. Ash will not give up easily, and his band of rogues will fight by his side until their victory, or their death. ~~~~~~~~ Hello! It's me, Sighnerd. This is the sequel to Forbidden, so you should probably read that first!! I still don't really have drawings of ALL the characters, but I have some, so you'll have to deal with text descriptions until I have them all. If I find the motivation to make them all, that is. But I'll try to make the descriptions better and not forget characters one fourth of the way through the book haha. Again, you don't need to understand Warrior Cats. Everything is explained. I don't own most of the characters, but I own some! Nor do I own Warrior Cats. Cover art is by ProductionRoxy. Trying to keep the characters as canon as possible, but it's difficult when some of them- like Swad or Bird- don't have much information on them. But I'm trying!! It's easier with characters I own :]

Izura Afton, Lolbit's soul (Book 3) by AnniePaul5

With two new members joining the family, William decides to ruin Endeavor even more and Izura's having a tough time as she keeps falling asleep in school when doing joint training with class 1-B and Hitoshi finds out why as he wants to... KILL THEM?! What happened and what's wrong with Izura?! Will the L.O.V even get a win out of the Heroes as the Aftons and Emilys keep an eye out thanks to William being the new Number One Hero? Warnings: Mention of suicide, family rage, Todoroki Family Drama, Izura being too innocent and ignorantly of her own actions cause of Inko and more. Additional tags: #r18plus, #mxf, #mxm, #mxfxm, #chakra, #magic, #death, #oc-harry-s-sister, #oc-Izuku-s-borhter. P.S, Removed the 'Femlae!IzukuxLolbit' from the couple section as Lolbit has the male form possessed by her big brother, Izuael Midoriya. You'll met him in the story properly now. The cover picture's Izura in a pretty dress and ignore the arm. I had to crop it from another picture to get her only. Plus a change in the couples and I'll fix that up for the second book once this one's posted. Couples: Female!Izuku×Yenndo William×Ivory C.C×Nightmare Michael×Ennard Elizabeth×Gabriel TerrancexNightmare Bonnie Cassidy×Charlie Gregory×Susie Shota×Hizashi Dabi/Touya×Keigo ShigarakixMiruko Bakugou×Ashido×Kirishima Eri×Kota Ero×Sammy Nejire×Nightmare Fredbear MahoroxNightmare Freddy KatsumaxNightmare Marionette (Nightmarionne/Nightmare Puppet/Nightmarionette) Uraraka×Toga Fritz×Jeremy Todoroki×Yaoyorozu Glitchtrap/Vincent×Vanny Naruto×Gaara Harry×Draco RosellaxFuntime Freddy IzuaelxFuntime Foxy Marinette×Adrien HitoshixNeito DipperxBill MasonxWill TyronexKill MeixGlamrock Foxy ToshinorixToy ChicaxPhantom Chica

Multi-anime:Deku's in the multiverse by Gailiga19

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𝘽𝙤𝙤𝙢! 𝙍𝙤𝙢𝙖𝙣𝙘𝙚: Heart Of Gold by AuthorC_Official

Ever felt like life's a little too normal? Meet Maoru, a cat Mobian who's anything but. After years away, he's back on Mobius, all thanks to his friends dragging him into this mess. Childhood best friends, old flames, new faces and suddenly, everyone's interested in the laid-back feline with a smirk that hides more than it shows. Between his weird powers, his even weirder love life, and a past that won't stay buried, Maoru's got his hands er- paws full. Heart, humor, and a whole lot of chaos are (not-so) welcome to Maoru's world. Just don't ask what's under the bandages. "How can I allow myself to be vulnerable again..?" ●○●○●○●○ Heads up: This story's for a mature audience (15+). Expect angst, flirting, violence, drinking, and complicated relationships. If that's not your thing, no hard feelings but this might not be the story for you. I'm always open to respectful feedback, but please keep it constructive. Let's keep this fun for everyone. All canon characters belong to their respective owners. My OCs are my own.

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Down the Drain

He felt weak.He felt sick.He felt pain. But why?He had a normal day yesterday.He stayed at the dorms,he hanged out with his friends,he bonded with everyone,he didn't even train! So why?Why does he felt so sick. "𝐶𝑜𝑢𝑔ℎ!𝐶𝑜𝑢𝑔ℎ!" He looked at his hand. Blood... What's happening to Izuku? ........................................................................... Based on an actual event that happened to me during middle school. The only difference is that it's less embarrassing and a whole lot more angsty... This is what happens when I can't sleep so I think about story plots and at the same time remembering embarrassing moments during elementary- ........................................................................... Mha does not belong to me. Only the cover and the fanfic/one-shot.