The System
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Last published Sat, May 13, 2017
"I couldn't remember a normal world"
Structured. Routine. Civil. Imagine the cruel mental destruction of the world but ask yourself, who is left to pick up the pieces? Created for this new type of world, Specimen One slowly discovers nothing is as it seems. Nothing will be perfect. Breaking the system and unravelling the truth is the only way out....but she won't be alone.
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