Book Manuscript: Legend of The Axe
27 parts Complete This is the manuscript of a book I'm publishing.
I posted it here so hopefully I can get advice from other people lol
Elizabeth Oracle Amastacia is a 14-year-old elf witch in training who resides in Eden, a large city in the Kingdom of Stora, with her friend, Reed Silkspin, the spider girl. The summer is long and hot until storms begin raging throughout the Kingdom, strong enough to rip trees from the ground. The girls discover that the lightning is somehow summoning strange items from another world. What many have said was only a fairytale, the girls meet a human named Jamie Meyers. They make an oath with the human that they will bring her back to where she came from, but their only obstacle is scaling thousands of miles up the most dangerous mountain in the region, Mount Grimfate. When they encounter the Gods that rule over Stora, they come to realize that it might not just be Jamie they have to save and that both their universes may in their hands.