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Addendum
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Ongoing, First published Apr 19, 2017
I wrote this story in advance and I'm really just looking for comments and critiques so I can improve
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Some weird crap starts going down when this guys meets this girl and they fall  in love and have fun and I really don't want to spoil anything so just read it pls
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This is my first wattpad story and i wrote this a couple of years ago so sorry if its all over the place. critique as you please, because trust me, i need it