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A really rough draft of a story, looking for any pointers/ ideas!- About Leon, one of the few Elder vampires left and his life through the whole 'Teenage queen' phase in the vamp world! -Give it a shot!All Rights Reserved

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Being a werewolf is hard for Dawn Mooneast and hiding from her best friend Leila is proving to be a challenge. But when Dawn finds out that Leilas boyfriend Jake is also a werewolf too something tells Dawn that he is bad news. Something stalks Dawn, something that chooses her fate. That something is deadly and just waiting for her to mess up badly, so when Dawn is forced to make deadly sacrafises her fate is twisted and turned in a knot, Leila's life lies in the palm of her hands and Jake is dangerously close to finding out the truth... But, what if there was a way to get away? A way to hide? A way to even... escape? Dawn is scared and alone while Leila's in hospital fighting for her life, The something is watching her and the wolves in the woods are stirring, killing, hunting... The Wolves are dragging her down.

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Leon's a captivating 21 year old young man. Who's carefree and Wealthy. Sophia's 20. She has captivating black eyes with long lashes but wears glasses. She has long black hairs with bangs. She doesn't like to wear makeup and her dressing is always simple yet elegant. Leon and Sophia's family were life long enemies. Despite that Leon fell in love with her. He'd met her in the woods for the first time. She was always calm, teasing, innocent and sometimes even adorable. But she'd never treated him like her enemy. She'd always understood him like no one other did. He felt easy to talk to her. She'd never gotten angry. Though she was adorable when she pouted. An angry pout that lasted a few seconds when he annoyed her. Later he got in a car accident. Got seriously injured. And lost his memories of her. He didn't remembered her name or anything. He became just like he was before meeting her. But sometimes he had glimpse of her but not completely her face. He couldn't understand who is this woman in his thoughts.

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Horror Fort Chapter Rejected wolves, their mates injured and so did a part of them. They are hired by the mafia to do jobs that humans cannot do. Rejected wolves, their mates injured and so did a part of them. They are hired by the mafia to do jobs that humans cannot do. They have the strength of fight bulls, . They live underground, their thirst is to kill. Now, they are in turf war with the family. They need something to stop the war so they hire Beast to kidnap the Perez family member , and will be used as a pawn to stop the fight and reclaim territory. But something goes wrong and Beast takes the little princess to the island they use as their capture place . Then things really get complicated. have the strength of bulls, and survive tortures etc. They live underground, their thirst is to kill. Now, the Perez family are in turf war with the other family. They need something to stop the war so they hire Beast to kidnap the other family, and will be used as a pawn to stop the fight and reclaim territory. But something goes wrong and Beast takes the little princess to the island they use as their prison. Then things really get complicated.

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Being a werewolf is hard for Dawn Mooneast and hiding from her best friend Leila is proving to be a challenge. But when Dawn finds out that Leilas boyfriend Jake is also a werewolf too something tells Dawn that he is bad news. Something stalks Dawn, something that chooses her fate. That something is deadly and just waiting for her to mess up badly, so when Dawn is forced to make deadly sacrafises her fate is twisted and turned in a knot, Leila's life lies in the palm of her hands and Jake is dangerously close to finding out the truth... But, what if there was a way to get away? A way to hide? A way to even... escape? Dawn is scared and alone while Leila's in hospital fighting for her life, The something is watching her and the wolves in the woods are stirring, killing, hunting... The Wolves are dragging her down.

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