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A really rough draft of a story, looking for any pointers/ ideas!- About Leon, one of the few Elder vampires left and his life through the whole 'Teenage queen' phase in the vamp world! -Give it a shot!All Rights Reserved

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Unedited Leon was as normal as he could get. At least as normal as any kid, who watched their parents get murdered in a closet, could be. He lives with his grandma in a small city. Atleast he used to, till she's killed too. Leon's grandpa moves in, then after a night at his friends house, everything turns upside down and inside out for Leon. He finds A short story from the Blood Reaper Realms

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