To The Shock of Miss Louise (Carousel Series #1)
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  • Reads 3,685
  • Votes 268
  • Parts 15
  • Time 1h 58m
Complete, First published Apr 27, 2017
What if the movie wasn't just a fantasy but based in truth?

Ruby's not thrilled about the proposition David proposes, but her life in Los Angeles isn't going anywhere. Moving to Santa Cruz, living in a cave with four teenage vampires, and trying to get a horror film about vampires made by Hollywood? That's a lot more fun.

It might even turn out to be an eternal party...

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I began The Carousel Series nearly 20 years ago. "To The Shock of Miss Louise" is republished here in its original form, unchanged. That means you get to see all the mistakes; a lack of punctuation, bad grammar and sorely needing an editor. The bones of the story are solid and it's cringe-worthy now but it was my first major piece of fan fiction and I'm still immensely proud of it.

TLSOMS would end up spawning three sequels, which are part of the Carousel Series and can be found here, on Wattpad, as well.

[Writer's Note: Any characters, settings, events, etc. created for and found in the movie "The Lost Boys" belong to Warner Bros and the respective creators/writers. Used without express permission for the sole purpose of fan fiction, without the intent of infringement. Please don't sue me. All original characters, the plot and events of "To The Shock of Miss Louise" and its original attributes were created by and belong solely to the author. They are not to be used/manipulated by anyone else for any other project.]
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