Model Perfection
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Last published Mon, Oct 28, 2013
Claire Telmar is just an average seventeen year old girl. She's smart, athletic, and very sarcastic. Her sister Macie is the youngest up and arising model at only fifteen, and although modeling is Macie's life, Chace has never seen the real draw to it. When Macie gets the chance to attend a super prestegious top modeling school guaranteed to make you or break you, she is more than exstatic. Things take a turn for the worse though when Macie all of a sudden comes down with pnemonia and can no longer attend. Thats when her identical looking sister Chace decides to take matters into her own hands and goes in Macie's place, anyways, how hard can modeling really be?
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