If you could see me right now...
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Last published Sat, May 4, 2013
This story is about two teenage girls. They both fancy this gorgeous guy. But little do they know he fancy's both of them. When one of the girls moves away, will they be able to remain best-friends forever? Will long distance relationships work? You never know.
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