The Fair Maiden
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  • LECTURES 14
  • Votes 3
  • Parties 1
  • Durée <5 mins
Terminé, Publié initialement avr. 29, 2017
This is a poem a friend created. I can see that she put effort in it. And I can see the message to it. It was really touching indeed 👌
I even shed a tear. :'D


From what its given, a fair maiden who was very kind, lost her father. She went into dispair and was driven by darkness. Lost in this darkness, she regains her memorys from the past. Revealing her love she once gived. Soon realizing she was never alone.

If you are clever enough to figure out what the poem is telling than I congratulate you ;)

Its been given, what others and I think of we rate this a 9.5 out of 10. Excellent work the writer of this. 

9.5 ▪ 10
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