It was the sparkle in her eyes
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Last published Fri, Dec 27, 2013
"If I said I didn't know what made me fall in love with her, I would be lying. It was her eyes. The dark brown ones that looked black but weren't. When I first saw her she was running onto the beach with a surf board. She looked up at me and smiled. From then on. I knew it was love at first sight. And it was all because of those big brown eyes. The same eyes her boyfriend was in love with"
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