Back Again (Draft)
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Brook grew up on the streets fending for herself, until the leader of a popular gang in California took her under his wing, from then on she was apart of the family. After loosing her boyfriend in a mass shooting she didn't want anything to do with the group, she continually kept leaving, until she finally figured out that Blood Shot was her home. get ready for a roller coaster of crying-laughing and fanboy/girling.
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To prefis the title, basically I am testing my story writing, so I'm going to be constantly going back and re-writing things and fixing things here and there. I know where I want this story to go it's just a matter of moving things around and getting it to where I want it, so your feedback is very much appreciated. Once it's completed and I'm happy with it the completed book will be separate to this one, because I want to be able to go back and see all the progress I've made, if your still here thank you for reading and helping me better my writing
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