In Deep (rewriting?? )
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PLZ PLZ PLZ go to other story. I am going to be changing a lot of the plot of this one and also my writing is just bleh
A trip to Hawaii, that's all it was supposed to be. 2 weeks of relaxation in paradise. That was until he came. He brought love, adventure, and chaos into Sara's dream vacation.
"OMG," I said screaming, frantically waving a small rectangular piece of paper in my hand, running towards my group of friends who were looking at me like I was crazy.
"Guess what my dad gave to me for my birthday last night?" I yelled. They all just looked at me "I'm going to Hawaii!"
#1 in #youngromance March/10/ 2018
#1 in #summervacation October/ 28 / 2019
#5 in #summerromance March/ 19/ 2020
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