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itsadelleee
Ongoing, First published May 03, 2017
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♡Started writing  5-22-17♡

"So, Kaz, tell me about yourself. Not the-My favorite color is pink, I love Starbucks, and I have a dog named FiFi-kind of shit," he said in a girly voice which made me laugh. "Tell me about your personal life," he asked.

"Um. okay," I said nervously. My life wasn't something I particularly like to talk about and I always get nervous talking about it.

So, when the waiter brought back our waters I took a large sip of water to calm my nerves.

"I can go first if you want. And sorry I'm being so abrupt, but I really want to get to know you more and I want you to want to know more about me since your going to be my girlfriend," he explained and then smiled.

I literally choked on my water.

W
H
A
T
Girlfriend ??

WHAT.

I think my brain started shutting down or something because I couldn't talk. Or breathe. Or think. 
* * *

Kaz Chan, a very intelligent 17-year old who is, unfortunately, the victim of constant bullying at her high school due to her smarts and nerdy appeal, causing her to be antisocial and not have any friends. With problems at home and a strict mom who is breathing down her neck about her grades, Kaz finds it difficult to be happy.

Alex Lee Flynn has the looks, the money, the athleticism, and most importantly, the grades. He's considered to be one of the most popular boys in all of High School. He's the all-star and captain of his soccer team and even already signed with Standford to play there. But he's got problems of his own he's got to handle.

Alex and Kaz are longtime competitors in the academic world. Ever since 8th grade either would challenge to be better, smarter, or more knowledgeable in a subject. So when they are both nominated to represent the school in a science fair all the way in New York, little do they know they will have to work together. 

When a terrible event happens to Kaz, bringing her and Alex closer than ever, will this rebuild her hope of happiness or will it lead to her Breaking Point?
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