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Mistakes [Under Revisions]
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For eighteen-year-old Angel moving around is her thing. she never really cared if she was the new girl in the class or even the school. She likes to keep things to herself and doesn't trust anyone, but her 20-year-old brother Max. She just moved to Hilltop high. same old, same old right? Angel went in thinking the same thing, you know same high school drama as any school. School Jocks, School Sluts, School Nerds, School wanna beez, School blah blah blah you get the point. Angel may seem like your typical soft-spoken, quiet shy girl, but there is a side to her that no one really knows,
The outgoing, snarly, over sarcastic, riled up Angel, A side to her in which she tries and intends to keeps bottled up, locked up, and stone away in the farthest and remote part of her, No one Is allowed. But will meeting Christian Dawn keep Angel under control or will he just be the key to opening her steal Master lock pad....
and let all hell loose?
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