Broken
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A mysterious murder has just happened and no one knows the criminal or where the body is hidden. Who can it be? Josephine sets out with Jason to find out. They are just two normal teenagers. But, anyone can be a hero just like anyone can be a BETRAYER.
Prologue:
I took a last glimpse at the person who pushed me, before my vision became blurry and the water engulfed me, pulling me down to the bottom of the tiled Olympic sized pool. No one was ever going to find me here. Ever. She may look like an innocent beauty on the outside but inside all she really is, is the beast. Ugly and waiting to kill its first prey; Completed.
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