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Última publicación dom, ago 13, 2017
I struggled to light my cigarette as the icy wind flowed against my skin. Leaning against the sandy brick walls of the high school, I saw her exit the building.
Every breath that left her mouth appeared in the air as if she were smoking the cigarette held in my hand. She licked her perfect lips before pulling out a lip balm and swiping it across them. Stunning...
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Logan Williams. He's not to be messed with, some say he's "definitely OCD or something" he thinks he just has an attention to detail. Who can blame him for his upbringing.
Carter smith. She's your 'typical' girl as she would describe herself. She doesn't find herself special. However she does have a slight secret and she's caught the attention of Logan.
What will happen when Carters mom goes on a business trip and leaves her in the hands of her close friends, who also happen to be parents to Logan.
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Yes, there will be mistakes. Yes, there will be errors. No, I can't spell for a toffee. But I hope you give this story a chance! Plus this story will be a blend of english and American so good luck 😂
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