Unnoticed
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  • Reads 442
  • Votes 62
  • Parts 22
  • Time 47m
Ongoing, First published May 07, 2017
Mature
Marania: "I've liked you-......actually, I've LOVED you for such a long time now that I don't even think its possible for me to like you that much."
Jordan: Well I don't think the secret I've kept for so long, about you...... is even possible. Once again, I'm SO sorry for doing that to you and everyone else I'm disappointed in myself. 
Marania: ONCE AGAIN..,stop saying sorry I understand you didn't mean for the outcome of your plan to be like- (looking at the scene in front of them) this! I'm just happy you're okay. (Smiling)
 Jordan: Thanks! By the way there's something I've always wanted to do. (Smirking)
Marania: What is it?------! (Thinking) He's......(very surprised)


Marania Toka is a girl who's had a crush on a boy named Jordan Cruze since pre-k. She's your weird, funny, fun, sometimes serious, strong, energetic, and playful 16 year old teen. She's always been the unnoticed girl at her school. But when she figures out Jordan has a brother who's been pulling a few strings for his brother, she and her friends lives' take a twisted turn! What'll happen? 
Read to find out!


A/N: Btw....the first 8 parts are crappy and its when I had no experience so read at your own risk! As you can obviously see,..I'm editing the description now because the previous description of this story was crappy and looking all hobo-like. So I just hope you all like this story, vote, and comment anything. (I don't care about hate comments but just don't start spamming me or anything like that 😩. I could care less about what you say since my life doesn't evolve on your hate comments so yeah........ENJOY?😐😂😃😁😊


Please don't copy this story or steal anything from it for all the work and effort that was put into it came from the top of my head. If anyone copies my story.....: I will stalk you for the rest of life and assassinate you unexpectedly. Jk! 😜
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