That Ghetto Love Between Two Different World's

Okay I'm back I was only a sophomore or freshmen when I wrote this book now that I'm in college I realize that this is a good story I just need to update the way they talk and add more detail so if your still interested there will be more uploads soon with more detail this I promise. I have already started editing chapter 1 it will be up soon. Let me know what you think if it got better or worse. Also i guess i already had chapter 8 ready or half way ready so I'll upload that to and re edit it later I'm going chapter by chapter so by next week I should have chapter 2 edited and ready to go.