Invincible

This story is kind of a personal story no real names are used but it kinda hits home with me, and tells a little about me. Clearly it is a fictional story but has some truths in it you should be able to tell what is real and what's not, but maybe you won't. It is about my brother and I.
Emily and Andy make plans to go on a trip to Ireland where their mother had always wanted to go but never got the chance. So they are saving up money to go and meet this girl Sophia that Emily is kind of skeptical about through out the story. But then Emily gets really sick and didn't have long to live, but somehow she healed it was a miracle a little to shocking to one man....... Read the Story to see what happens.
This is also a story I have been writing for my English class. We were told only 5 but I am going to hit this one out of the park. Our teacher has come to believe that our generation has no creativity anymore and I am here to prove him wrong. Everyone in my class could barley make 5. Please tell me what you think just leave a comment or a like or message me. Thank you and Enjoy.