The Demon Inside Me

Sierra Watson, all she ever wanted was a normal life. She has lost her father in a tragic death, and left her mother for college. Which meant she was alone, in a country of horror. She is tortured by this Demon who takes over her and makes her weak, and it leaves her broken.

13/7/17: 100 reads!

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