Perfection [On hold - changing a lot of the story)
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  • Reads 32,626
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  • Parts 11
  • Time 2h 14m
Ongoing, First published Dec 25, 2013
America has been divided into two factions, the cause being the inveterate compulsion that demands adequacy in all aspects of beauty: perfection. Two contrasting societies sectioned from each other, with one side completely altering themselves to achieve the aim their ardent desire for perfection is fuelling whilst the other loathes the very principle of it, preaching it as a wrong and sinful act formed by a lust for refinement.

Fleur Huxley is bound by her societies distaste for perfection. Lessons taught in an attempt to restrict this forbidden desire have been to no avail as covertly, Fleur can't help but be entranced by it all. After America's annual Supremacy day - a ceremony in which an individual is whisked away to a life in the perfection division - Fleur's life takes a sudden turn into a world she isn't familiar with. 

With impending rebellions and a zeal for perfection inciting her actions, Fleur is slipped into a world of deceptive passion and ravishing beauty, a place in which dangerous secrets lie behind the most beautiful eyes.

But Fleur is oblivious to it all, persistent in her hunt for perfection but as haunting realities threaten the world she is enthralled by, will Fleur finally realise there is a dark side to perfection? 

After all, in a passion-driven world built on deceit, how many sacrifices can you truly make on a quest for ultimate perfection?

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Book 3: FALCON FAMILY SERIES Meet Shanelle Falcon, the epitome of perfection, a member of the prestigious Falcon family. But behind her flawless facade lies a world of secrets waiting to be unveiled. While her siblings toil away in the family business, Shanelle embraces a life of freedom and glamour as a renowned supermodel. In her luxurious penthouse, she surrounds herself with her closest friends, fellow supermodels who share her insatiable appetite for living life on the edge. Together, they create an illusion of perfection to maintain their coveted status in the industry. But what nobody knows is that Shanelle battles crippling panic attacks, striking at the most unexpected moments. As her family slowly disintegrates, with her sisters resenting her and her older brother tragically gone, her once-idyllic life teeters on the brink of collapse. Enter Vincent Rivero, a scion of a powerful and wealthy family, notorious for his dangerous reputation as the leader of San Francisco's most feared gang. The clash between Miss Perfect and Mr. Bad Boy is imminent, with their initial encounter leaving no doubt that they are destined to clash. Shanelle perceives him as a malevolent influence, while Vincent believes she's too sheltered for her good. Prepare to be captivated by the collision of two worlds as these complex characters navigate their way through love, loss, and unexpected bonds that defy societal expectations. Unveiling the true meaning of perfection, this story will leave you questioning whether flaws truly define us and whether love can bridge the gap between two seemingly irreconcilable souls.