"The Enchanted Eyes"
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"To see the future, to see the past, to see death, to see life, to hear thoughts, to feel emotions, to act out the heart, and to act out the mind."
An original 'mystery/supernatural' story by me. The story will revolve around Amy Lee, a certain highschool girl who gains one of the eight so-called 'abilities' and becomes a 'wielder'. She will learn to control her own power and try to find the seven other wielders, making friends along the way.
This is my first original story. I've written what I originally wanted this story to be before, but I couldn't continue it due to lack of inspiration. The original version has now been deleted but I plan to keep this one going. I would like to thank my two friends for convincing me to start writing again, they will be credited at the end of the prologue.
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