Love is Pain (Completed)

Love is Pain (Completed)

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This is a story about a girl named Amanda Diaz. Amanda is a junior in college. She and her boyfriend named Chris Mares are happy but one day something happen. Amanda and Chris break up. When all of a sudden an old friend of hers from middle school transfers to her college. His name is Eric Aguirre. Eric and Amanda start to become close and Chris doesn't like it. Chris realizes Amanda's the best girl he could ever have. So Chris is going to fight for her back. Who will Amanda pick? Chris or Eric both amazing guys. ~ A Little Sneak Peek ~ He grabbed my hands getting down on one knee then said " Amanda Lilith Diaz will you marry me ". I was so shocked for a few seconds. I was going to answer him when Chris said " bravo just simply bravo. Amanda thinks she's going to end up with some water obsessed freak ". I turned to look at him that's when Eric said " oh and just who are to judge anyone because all I see is some spineless cowered". Chris said " SHUT UP you ugly dirt bag your just jealous ". " Of what the fact that Amanda won't take you back or because as soon as I came back in town she forgot all about you. News flash man she loves me not you because when she did you chickened out. Besides I've loved her all my life so just leave her alone you dick" Eric then kissed me just to piss Chris off. ~ ~ ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please don't hate it. This is my first story I've ever written. I'm sorry for all my grammar mistakes. It is constantly undergoing change to make it better. (Please read my other story's)
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"I may not remember much, but I do know that I had the best time with you last night." Charlie drops his hand from his mouth and lifts his head to stare into my eyes, pushing his hair back from his face at the same time. "And I know this is awkward now, because I'm pretty sure we were both naked together in bed last night..." I choke on air, trying to dispel the imaginary object from my throat. Charlie reaches out and lightly grasps my hand; my eyes slide from our interlocked fingers to his shining pupils. "...but I still wouldn't change a single thing about it. So, I really do look forward to hearing from you later, Kaiydeen." It's like I've been taken hostage by his electric stare. I don't want to look away. I never want to look away. The busy noises of the street and the honking of the traffic fade as I lose focus, nothing strong enough to force my attention away from this boy. Finally, Archer loudly clears his throat as he flings his door open and plops into the car with a huff, breaking the trance between the two of us. I look away as I withdraw my hand from his grasp, trying to figure out what the hell just happened. This is going to be a long 6 months. ●●● Kaiydeen has always known what she wanted, more like who, but she never knew exactly how to get it. So she's complacent with biding her time until it, actually he, comes to her; no matter how long that takes. But then one day she crashes into someone she doesn't expect. Someone that has always had an eye for her, and he isn't satisfied with biding his time until she's his. But when the one person she's always wanted admits he wants her, too, she's forced to make a choice. Should she go for the boy she just met or the boy she's always known? There is some use of mature language in this story, so if your eyes are innocent and you want them to stay that way this might not be the story for you. Credit to @slueths for the incredible cover!!

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