Saving Love
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  • Reads 186
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  • Parts 15
  • Time 44m
Ongoing, First published May 18, 2017
Mature
-----------------------------------------------------------------"Come out to play Violet!" Someone said, from the darkness, "I want to play with you?"

Then I started screaming."Stop screaming Violet! I just want to play. Why won't you play with me, Vi-Vi? Your making Daddy sad! You don't want to make Daddy sad do you?" He said. I stopped screaming.

He said again,"That's a good girl, now come on it's time to play!" I then started crying,"Stop crying Violet or something bad will happen. Do you want something bad to happen?" I stopped crying, waiting for what he would say next.

" Now come on Violet or I will come in there, and you doing want me to come in there."

I started screaming, "My name is not Violet! My name is Melencia Hartlen. I am 12 years old. My Dad's name is Bob Hartlen, and my Mom's name is Marie Hartlen. My best friend is June Hutchins and my sisters name is Athena Hartlen." I kept on repeating it over and over again. Then a light  came on and I could see through a window into another room. Where a guy was holding someone in his hands with a gun to its head, and then I realize that person is June. Then I pass out to a gunshot. ----------------------------------------------------------------
When Melencia Hartlen gets kidnapped along with her crush, her best friend, her two cousins, and her twin sister, she is wound into a horror show. Their kidnapper, Daddy (He wants them to call him that) has hurt each one of them, untill Melencia gets hurt bad. What will happen when Melencia's love is slowly dripping through her fingers. Will she be able to save her love from falling?
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