Torture of the eyes

Every high school has its queen bee and her minors(the mean girls) , a cool jock (the captain of the football team, the hottest guy in school , queen bee's boyfriend and a typical player) , his best friend and finally the novel's protagonist who's usually the nerdy type or an invisible girl, who has her own charm hidden behind her huge glasses , gigantic braces and horrible clothes , but some how or by some way , either an accident happens or a miracle happens that she gets a make over and our sexy God (the school's hottest boy) is able to see her charm and recognises her inner beauty then... there love story begins and they live happily ever after..... but this time , my sincere apologies for damaging your hopes , but my novel is going to completely change this happy ending as it will all go upside down, since my novel is from the queen bee's perspective ... yes that bitchy slut , who usually makes your life and high school a living hell is actually our hero this time.
But what if this girl isn't that bad, if actually being mean,was a mask used to protect her self and if her rudeness with every one was actually the torture of her eyes......!
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This is my first novel ever ...... although I know that it's not that good , probably lacking efficiency and has a lot of punctuation mistakes , but still though I hope you'd like it ... for me it's an accomplishment as I am not a native speaker. I thought a lot before being able to gain the courage to publish my story and I hope from all my heart that it gains your likes.....thank you for giving me some of your precious time in reading my novel and hope you enjoy it😄😄😃